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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

waking the giant

this week we were using a image as a story starter. check out my tuhituhi. 
The ground began to shake. Birds sprang from the branches of trees in a state of panic as the huge figure crawled out of the earth. First it was an elbow…Then a head…Then a colossal, moss-covered, stone face … An almighty bellow erupted from the giant’s enormous mouth, shaking the windows of the house. He dragged his immense torso out of the ground, then his feet (which were the size of double-decker buses) and stood up to his full height. Menacingly, he turned and strolled towards the house, a look of hunger in his bulging eyes. He looked in the house he saw the human he was he was frightened of the human! He screamed and said “Who are you”!!! “What do you mean I was watching Shortland Street. Now I will get back to watching Shortland Street.” Thank you very much” said the human. Then the giant went to the Tower of London he almost ate the queen but no he did’t because her daughter was mean he did not want a mean queen. Now he has gone to the Tower of London, he is going to Europe he saw a fancy house. It was George Washington’s house. George Washington said to the giant “good afternoon mister giant how are you '' good afternoon George Washington i am good how are you know what i don’t care I will eat you now ” replied the giant. So he as the giant ate George Washington he’s wife came at and said “put him down now” The giant put george washington down and said “Sorry George Washington '' but the giant ate he’s mum! The end thank you. 

4 comments:

  1. Wow, what a cool story can you please tell me more about the giant?

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  2. kia ora mum thank you for commenting on my blog. love you.

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  3. What an amazing story Yazmin.You used some great describing words and I felt like I was part of the story.The way you explained how the giant spoke,made me think of the noise a tornado might make.
    I was just wondering,did you write the story from beginning to end or did the teacher give you a starting point to write from?.

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    1. kia ora no she let us right what we wanted

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