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Thursday, June 11, 2020

tuhituhi

The Old Railroad It had been many years since the shrill shriek of a steam train puffing along the track had been heard in these parts. The Northern Railroad had been discontinued after the great disaster on June 11th, 1911. Ever since that day, the Railroad company had been nothing but a distant memory, a story to be told around the campfire late into the night. As the group sat around their newly constructed camp, listening to the crackle of the flames as they licked up into the night, their minds wandered back to the stories they had heard from their fathers. So absorbed were they in the moment, and the mesmerizing glow of the fire, that it was hard to tell if the shrill shriek coming from the distance was part of their imaginations. They say that there are zombies on the train that are going to come and get us all! Then some ghosts appear and some aliens come. Then one of the aliens said “come here to me”. The humans said “no”, so that is when the war started. The humans got eaten. Now the ghosts and the aliens role the word. But 2 humans didn't get eaten, they worked together to get rid of the aliens and ghosts! But the aliens and ghosts had to eat them so they did! That was sad but they had to do it, then something happened, there was standing right behind them there was the holce! They were going to run but the holce took them and said “can i have a hag”? Then they said “why yes you can have a hag”. “Thank you,” said the holce. They ask him why he is sad and he says that he lost a Fight. Then the holce crashed into them, he had a kid, a wife. But the kid was named Braxton, Braxton’s mum’s name is Te’ Puna. But they all had to hide but not holce. But the holce was 57 and the kid was 7 and the wife was only 47. Part 2 will be coming soon.

3 comments:

  1. Interesting wee bit of writting, did you write this?

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    1. yes mum i did do this thank you and why did you think i did not write this?

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    2. I was just wondering. You have done very well with your punctuation. and it is very well written

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