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Thursday, May 7, 2020

My story

Once upon a time there was a king named King Richard. King Richard was rich.King Richard was the most unpleasant King that his Kingdom had ever had. Because when they went to war he did not help he stayed in bed and slept all day. The villages felt unsettled because their king did not help fight for his kingdom. He did not want to help fight for his kingdom and the villages were mad at the king. The king decided to flee his kingdom by running away. But the Villages did not know that he was gone Until they went to the Castle to ask him Question . They were Worried about him. The end. Thank you.

2 comments:

  1. What a fantastic start to your story Yazmin. I was able to picture the villagers and the king. I am dying to find out what happens next, maybe you could add onto this story and tell us about what happened to the king when he ran away? Where did he go? That was a bit sneaky to run away.

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  2. Wow, what a great story Yazmin. I would love to read more, maybe you could write some more for us. Great work with your punctuation, I can tell that you are really trying.

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